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You're everything to me,
You make me all that I can be.
You raise me up.
You are the wind beneath my wings.
Take me away.
To where we can be together
Hold me close and say,
“I will be here forever.”
It’s forbidden.
Vowed to love for evermore
Torn away by hatred and war.
To save the peace we must sacrifice what is dear
I wish you not to leave for I am still here.
Please…call my name one more time
So I know, even in death, you are still mine.
“There never was a story of more woe
Then this of Juliet and her Romeo.”
ok this is my latest poem i wrote, not an old one i found. it took me about 30 minutes to write it, and im very proud of it. i loved how it came out.

it was inspired by the most recent anime i have been obsessing over, "RomeoXJuliet". also i managed to put in my favorite quote from the original Romeo and Juliet so that part of the poem is not an original peice of mine.

i wrote it to show the key point of the classical tragedy. and i think i did that ^^

hope you all enjoy..
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RooDaDoo2442 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
you know i bet 99.9999% of the people who read your description went and looked up that anime just cause you mentioned it...
i know i did
but it's really funny how if you say something people just can't seem to resist checking it out XP
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
XDDD really? thats kinda cool.. but it is a realyl good anime.. to me at least ^^; ty
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RooDaDoo2442 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
^^
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drake3332 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
great stuff again, youve beaten all my poems in coolness so good job!
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
oh nuh huh! i LOVE your poems.. tho i LOVE this one X3
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5000guru Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
Marvelous work m'lady. Hm, now the've made an anime of Romeo and Juliet? Shakespeare might be watching it.
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
that you very much, acually he was IN it ;P its a very good anime
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5000guru Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
You're welcome. WAIT! WHAT?! Shakespeare appeared in this anime? I really need to see it now.
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2009
well they call this one character "willy" and "willam" and he writes plays... AND he explains some plays Shakespear wrote.. and he asks Juliet if he can write about her and such.. so yh ^^
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5000guru Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2009
Hm, interesting.
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
yh and in the manga it introduces them and it said "Willam Shakespear"
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5000guru Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
Wait, in this series, does Romeo ride a motorcycle-esque vehicle?
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009
no.. a flying horse.. its midevil times
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wolfvahn Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
^ what the guy above me said, that and it has a very nice flow to it
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
its great love? *blinks.. and heh thank you ^^
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wolfvahn Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
minus the love part yes
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
XD ah ok then XD thank you
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wolfvahn Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
no problem Okami-chan!
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2009
heehee ;P
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wolfvahn Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2009
>.>
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ichigo30 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
IT GREAT LOVE
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SlowParentsCrossing Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009  Student Digital Artist
this cdme out really well!!
Must watch that anime now'
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
oh i LOVE it so much X3 i even put some things that is in the anime in there 83
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SlowParentsCrossing Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009  Student Digital Artist
I watch the fiat episode and juilet is so cute!!! So is romeo and benviolio and mercutio!! Agh sexy men!!
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
yh isnt she!? nd yes they are X3
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SlowParentsCrossing Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Must watch moreee now!

And happpy St.Patricks day :clover:
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
lol ^^

and you too ^^
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SlowParentsCrossing Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009  Student Digital Artist
hehe. Doncha love holidays?
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
heck yes
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xXxEMOxXxVEGANxXx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2009
I love this!!! :) Your are a vary good poet!!!! =D
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2009
why thank you so much it means a lot

this is one of my most favorite poem i wrote X3 (idk if that was proper english but hey ^^; )
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xXxEMOxXxVEGANxXx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2009
lol!!! I love your poems!!!! Your welcome for the fav and watch!!!! I think your a great poet!!!!! :)
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
why ty again :D :dances: there times that they just fly out of my brian..i acually havent written a poem in a while ^^;
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xXxEMOxXxVEGANxXx Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
lol!!! Well don't worry something will come!!!! =D
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Warewolf-DeleriousD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2009
aw ty ^^
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